I caught him sneekin a peek at a skirt in the breeze and snatched him back from the curb.
“Whatya doin? Stargazing?†I busted his head. “Quit it before you get hit by a bus.â€
The kid’s just like his dad. Amazing.
Fatherly advice
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Haha! Nice take on the question 🙂
Thanks, Stacie!
Meh…like father like son. Whatcha gonna do? 🙂
I’ve heard that can happen… 😉
Love the way you created a character in these few words.
Thanks, Cynk! It was fun to write.
Full story here! OUTSTANDING!
Wow, thanks! Glad you liked it.
Very nice, I like it.
Thanks, Mr. B. It’s always a good day when you compliment something I wrote. 🙂
Haha…so true. Not much can be done about genetics 🙂
I love the father’s voice! It sounded so genuine. I could definitely feel the father-son dynamic here. Great job!
Very comical, which I love!
So much character in so few words! One of my favorites!
Clever, Clever, this is great!
LOL! Awesome. Geez, kid. Quit yer star gazin’!
Very nice!
This is why I love short fic. Perfect little vignettes like this. I can hear the voices, smell the exhaust from the bus, see what they’re wearing…
Heh. Didn’t see this coming. Love the voice.
Watchin skirts huh? Very visual (pun not intended but left in anyway).
LOL. Loved it.
Haha! Fabulous take on the prompt, Christi! You are so good at painting a character through their voice.
Nothing like this has EVER happened to me. really. No…what?
You used so few words to make a character that I definitely want to read more of.
Awesome. Love the voice in this. You somehow managed to tell us an awful lot about that character. It’s hard to believe we had the same 42 words to work with.
I had to come read this one! Never disappointed.