Dr. Ricardo Abramowitz, DDS, rather enjoyed the view from his office window. He had long admired the view of the calm water, the prickly pines in the middle ground, and the low-slung mountains beyond. The clutter in the foreground wore on him: the stilted vacation houses, the candy shop, the gawker-laden cruise ships, all of it.
His patient sat up to spit in the small sink, and something caught Dr. Abramowitz’s eye through the glass. It was a girl, young enough to be his granddaughter, sunning herself on a porch.  She was topless, and her impossibly large breasts glistened in the sun.
İAy, ay, ay!†Dr. Ricardo thought.
ah.. and then he enjoyed the foreground view as well
Naughty! 🙂
That’s how to add appeal to the foreground. I loved how you went from lyrical to naughty!
Greetings from Greece!
Maria (MM Jaye)
I think he might be adjusting his perspective for the future. Nice change in pace there.
suddenly the foreground is interesting! Ah well.
Where! Where! I’m going down there now!!!
In the immortal words of George Takei, Oh my…..
What is it about this view that says “breasts†to us?
Christi, If she’s sunbathing in the sight of everyone, expecially the doctor, I’d be suspicious. Also, she better be careful. One of the neighbors might complain and she’ll charged with indecent exposure. If she’s under age, her parents will get the heat. Of course, it’s only fiction. I tend to think realistically, but those things would be good complications in a longer story. Well written. 🙂 —Susan
and her impossibly large breasts glistened in the sun – well, now, THAT is an interesting thought, vision, whatever.
Great story! You have a really interesting imagination to which the “Grandpa Dentist” is flustered, I think, now. Thanks! Nan 🙂
Dear E. M.
Looks like the dentist’s view just got a little better. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle